Does this game description need fixing?

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    Thunder_Crackle New Member

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    Here is Game description:


    -Go through the colorful mountain paths, as fast as possible to escape the flying thorns.
    The faster you run the more chances you have to survive!
    Do not look back, jump to paths the same color as the character, otherwise, you will not survive! Along the way collect the coins to unlock new characters!



    Yeah, I feel like my game description is ok, but not exactly sure what to change? Need some help, any suggestions would be great. Its actually already on ios and android, which makes me feel like I need to change something sooner.
     

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